I don't mind an informal style of writing on websites, but I am continually amazed that big businesses leave fundamentally illiterate people to do it.
Whoever wrote this for the TalkTalk website can't have passed a verbal reasoning test or know what "limit" means.
"Kids Safe was built to help protect children's safety online. If children use your internet connection, Kids Safe will limit access to websites defined as unsuitable for the family, including pornography and violence."
To me, that says that Kids Safe will only allow access to unsuitable websites, and only then "if children use your internet connection". Presumably if children do not use it, it will allow access to suitable ones as well.
If they would send me this stuff to review I could correct it for them for a very reasonable fee.
Sorry, I flipped into Meldrew mode while looking to see if I can get a better deal, having been prompted to renew my advance annual line rental payment.
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