>> I think the problem with the sentence is not merely a matter of commas, it's
>> the usage of 'being'.
>>
...the real problem with my original sentence is that it should have read:
"As he's a complete dipstick, he can't follow a thread to save his life"
(But I was trying to be less direct, and dipstick is itself more polite than d*******, which I originally typed)
;-)
Last edited by: tyrednemotional on Thu 3 Dec 20 at 21:01
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